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		<title>Comment on Picture books as a visual feast by jacquei</title>
		<link>http://jacquei.wordpress.com/2008/02/06/picture-books-as-a-visual-feast/#comment-30</link>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 30 Jun 2008 04:59:43 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>The collaboration of Gary Crew and Steven Woolman on The Watertower is a testament to the amazing visualisation which can be created in illustrating a simple text. The text lives through the visual, cinematic quality of illustrations. There is a wonderful intertextual homage to the b-grade hollywood horror movie in the manner in which Woolman creates the narrative. The textual narrative plays this off against the visual message in a manner that draws the reader/viewer in.

Steven Woolman’s graphic design skills takes a text which is somewhat problematic and makes it work as a text that can be read on many layers. The Watertower is nominally about a simple swim in the town water supply. However, the text alludes to and the visual imagery implies that there is something lurking in the watertower which will change Bubba and has already had a major effect on others in the town. The constant repeating of the eye-like symbol on the side of the tower, referenced in the eyes of the people in the street, and the shadows that fall like claws over Bubba’s eye, and the excited expectation on the faces, add to the filmic, surrealist feel of the book.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>The collaboration of Gary Crew and Steven Woolman on The Watertower is a testament to the amazing visualisation which can be created in illustrating a simple text. The text lives through the visual, cinematic quality of illustrations. There is a wonderful intertextual homage to the b-grade hollywood horror movie in the manner in which Woolman creates the narrative. The textual narrative plays this off against the visual message in a manner that draws the reader/viewer in.</p>
<p>Steven Woolman’s graphic design skills takes a text which is somewhat problematic and makes it work as a text that can be read on many layers. The Watertower is nominally about a simple swim in the town water supply. However, the text alludes to and the visual imagery implies that there is something lurking in the watertower which will change Bubba and has already had a major effect on others in the town. The constant repeating of the eye-like symbol on the side of the tower, referenced in the eyes of the people in the street, and the shadows that fall like claws over Bubba’s eye, and the excited expectation on the faces, add to the filmic, surrealist feel of the book.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Picture books that push the boundaries by jacquei</title>
		<link>http://jacquei.wordpress.com/2008/06/23/picture-books-that-push-the-boundaries/#comment-29</link>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 30 Jun 2008 04:54:30 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>In Encounter, Jane Yolen and David Shannon take on the mythology of Columbus and the discovery of America. As she does so often, Jane Yolen forces the viewer to see a different story to the one with which they are familiar.

Jane Yolen adopts an alternative perspective to the story of Columbus, forcing the reader to see his arrival through the eyes of a Taino boy. The avaricious eyes of the greedy Spanish Conquistadors repay their hosts’ hospitality with “the serpent’s smile – no lips and all teeth”. The illustrations compliment a text written from the point of the view of the Other, the de-privileged. The dark, sombre palette in which the Taino gleam like their gold reflects the hidden mysteries of the exotic to western eyes, with images stylised to reference the poses of the “indian” artefacts that are all that are left of their culture. Shannon’s illustrations create a sense that the reader is in the boy’s dream as people of his world appear as ghosts of their lost culture.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In Encounter, Jane Yolen and David Shannon take on the mythology of Columbus and the discovery of America. As she does so often, Jane Yolen forces the viewer to see a different story to the one with which they are familiar.</p>
<p>Jane Yolen adopts an alternative perspective to the story of Columbus, forcing the reader to see his arrival through the eyes of a Taino boy. The avaricious eyes of the greedy Spanish Conquistadors repay their hosts’ hospitality with “the serpent’s smile – no lips and all teeth”. The illustrations compliment a text written from the point of the view of the Other, the de-privileged. The dark, sombre palette in which the Taino gleam like their gold reflects the hidden mysteries of the exotic to western eyes, with images stylised to reference the poses of the “indian” artefacts that are all that are left of their culture. Shannon’s illustrations create a sense that the reader is in the boy’s dream as people of his world appear as ghosts of their lost culture.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Picture books that push the boundaries by jacquei</title>
		<link>http://jacquei.wordpress.com/2008/06/23/picture-books-that-push-the-boundaries/#comment-28</link>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 30 Jun 2008 04:52:19 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>The war theme continues with a poignant picture book about Yunko Morimoto&#039;s personal experiences as a survivor of the dropping of the atomic bomb on Hiroshima. In &#039;My Hiroshima&#039;, Yunko Morimoto has penned a persuasive argument against nuclear war. Her gentle, clear-sighted illustrations complement the simple and unemotional recall of her own experiences as one of the survivors of the murderous pay-load of Enola Gay. 

The stark image of the jetstream far up in the sky is a powerful yet minimal symbol of the price her city paid for the decisions of others. The graphic vision of the child weeping for her dead mother, the images of death and the thought of a child scratching through the dirt of the school playground and finding the bones of her dead school mates, bring home the reality of what was experienced by the people of Hiroshima. Morimoto blends her own imagery with photographic image and finally her summation of her own recollections.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>The war theme continues with a poignant picture book about Yunko Morimoto&#8217;s personal experiences as a survivor of the dropping of the atomic bomb on Hiroshima. In &#8216;My Hiroshima&#8217;, Yunko Morimoto has penned a persuasive argument against nuclear war. Her gentle, clear-sighted illustrations complement the simple and unemotional recall of her own experiences as one of the survivors of the murderous pay-load of Enola Gay. </p>
<p>The stark image of the jetstream far up in the sky is a powerful yet minimal symbol of the price her city paid for the decisions of others. The graphic vision of the child weeping for her dead mother, the images of death and the thought of a child scratching through the dirt of the school playground and finding the bones of her dead school mates, bring home the reality of what was experienced by the people of Hiroshima. Morimoto blends her own imagery with photographic image and finally her summation of her own recollections.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Picture books as a visual feast by jacquei</title>
		<link>http://jacquei.wordpress.com/2008/02/06/picture-books-as-a-visual-feast/#comment-27</link>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 30 Jun 2008 02:59:52 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>In &#039;Time to get out of the bath, Shirley&#039;, John Burningham has created a delightful romp through a child’s imagination. He juxtaposes a mother’s night-time ritual of harassing a small child out of clothes, through the bath and into her nightie with a demonstration of the power of the imagination, To do it, Shirley visits a world of knights in shining armour, rubber duckies big enough to play at dunking people in a flower filled moat, and castles with Kings who a quite happy to be knocked of their perch. His quirky illustrations are a successful compliment to the mother’s monologue. The soap nestling in the bottom of the water, the labyrinth of pipes through which Shirley’s fantasy travels, and her exploits as an escapee in a bath towel, sets a wonderful visual dialogue up with the blunt verbal nagging of the mother.

This is an older text, but still a wonderful one to engage children in the literacy experience, either in the classroom or at home.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In &#8216;Time to get out of the bath, Shirley&#8217;, John Burningham has created a delightful romp through a child’s imagination. He juxtaposes a mother’s night-time ritual of harassing a small child out of clothes, through the bath and into her nightie with a demonstration of the power of the imagination, To do it, Shirley visits a world of knights in shining armour, rubber duckies big enough to play at dunking people in a flower filled moat, and castles with Kings who a quite happy to be knocked of their perch. His quirky illustrations are a successful compliment to the mother’s monologue. The soap nestling in the bottom of the water, the labyrinth of pipes through which Shirley’s fantasy travels, and her exploits as an escapee in a bath towel, sets a wonderful visual dialogue up with the blunt verbal nagging of the mother.</p>
<p>This is an older text, but still a wonderful one to engage children in the literacy experience, either in the classroom or at home.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Picture books that push the boundaries by jacquei</title>
		<link>http://jacquei.wordpress.com/2008/06/23/picture-books-that-push-the-boundaries/#comment-26</link>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 30 Jun 2008 02:55:23 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Another one which touches on war and understanding, but carries other messages, of valueing memories and community, is Gary Crew&#039;s and Shaun Tan&#039;s &#039;Memorial&#039;.

&#039;Memorial&#039; endeavours to fulfil a number of roles. It is a didactic text, teaching about memory, the honouring of those who went to war, and the need to fight even when the odds are not in your favour. The recount is seen through the eyes of the young boy. The illustrations match the mood of remembrance, sepia, soft and nostalgic. They also reflect the pain which the boy’s father carries with him in the deep gaping hole of a wound when he observes that there are “some things you don’t want to remember”. This is in stark contrast to the warm hazy dappled light of his pleasant reminisces. In the conclusion, Old Pa observes that you are remembered for the fight in you, not whether you succeeded, as the visual language shows the sad, many ringed stump of the now fallen tree.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Another one which touches on war and understanding, but carries other messages, of valueing memories and community, is Gary Crew&#8217;s and Shaun Tan&#8217;s &#8216;Memorial&#8217;.</p>
<p>&#8216;Memorial&#8217; endeavours to fulfil a number of roles. It is a didactic text, teaching about memory, the honouring of those who went to war, and the need to fight even when the odds are not in your favour. The recount is seen through the eyes of the young boy. The illustrations match the mood of remembrance, sepia, soft and nostalgic. They also reflect the pain which the boy’s father carries with him in the deep gaping hole of a wound when he observes that there are “some things you don’t want to remember”. This is in stark contrast to the warm hazy dappled light of his pleasant reminisces. In the conclusion, Old Pa observes that you are remembered for the fight in you, not whether you succeeded, as the visual language shows the sad, many ringed stump of the now fallen tree.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Picture books as a visual feast by jacquei</title>
		<link>http://jacquei.wordpress.com/2008/02/06/picture-books-as-a-visual-feast/#comment-25</link>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 30 Jun 2008 00:55:39 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Jeannie Baker’s collage and textual plea for the preservation of the rainforests of the Daintree presents a powerful ecological argument. The superb illustrations are all the more persuasive for the intricate and demanding collage with which they are created.  Baker puts together a persuasive set of verbal and visual pleas for the protection of our vanishing wilderness. To do it, she uses a blend of statistics and a reflective recount of the boy’s fantasised sightings of the many former inhabitants during his walk deep into the forest, as well as his contemplative reflections of the future as he joins his father for a freshly caught fish supper.

This is a text which has been used countless times in the classroom, not only for its textual richness, but also for its ability to lend itself to lessons across the curriculum, from Visual Arts to Science to the Built Environment elements of HSIE. Indulge yourself but remember it is a path well trodden in the classroom.

Jeannie Baker, Where the Forest Meets the Sea, London: Walker Books, 1987</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Jeannie Baker’s collage and textual plea for the preservation of the rainforests of the Daintree presents a powerful ecological argument. The superb illustrations are all the more persuasive for the intricate and demanding collage with which they are created.  Baker puts together a persuasive set of verbal and visual pleas for the protection of our vanishing wilderness. To do it, she uses a blend of statistics and a reflective recount of the boy’s fantasised sightings of the many former inhabitants during his walk deep into the forest, as well as his contemplative reflections of the future as he joins his father for a freshly caught fish supper.</p>
<p>This is a text which has been used countless times in the classroom, not only for its textual richness, but also for its ability to lend itself to lessons across the curriculum, from Visual Arts to Science to the Built Environment elements of HSIE. Indulge yourself but remember it is a path well trodden in the classroom.</p>
<p>Jeannie Baker, Where the Forest Meets the Sea, London: Walker Books, 1987</p>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 30 Jun 2008 00:51:04 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Wild and Vivas tackle a subject of great sensitivity in &#039;Let the Celebrations Begin&#039;, exloring the fate of children in the concentration camps and their need for toys. They have been criticised for too lightly rendering a tragic topic. Vivas’ usually luscious people have become gaunt and eye-filled, and the simple rendering of the scene setting comment, “My name is Miriam, and this is where I live. Hut 18, bed 22”, brings the reader into the environment of horror. Author and illustrator clearly see it as a message of hope, a testament to the human spirit, and acknowledgment of the need to survive, to think outside the daily horror of the German Concentration camps.

Margaret Wild and Julie Vivas, Let the Celebrations begin, Norwood: Omnibus Books, 1991</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Wild and Vivas tackle a subject of great sensitivity in &#8216;Let the Celebrations Begin&#8217;, exloring the fate of children in the concentration camps and their need for toys. They have been criticised for too lightly rendering a tragic topic. Vivas’ usually luscious people have become gaunt and eye-filled, and the simple rendering of the scene setting comment, “My name is Miriam, and this is where I live. Hut 18, bed 22”, brings the reader into the environment of horror. Author and illustrator clearly see it as a message of hope, a testament to the human spirit, and acknowledgment of the need to survive, to think outside the daily horror of the German Concentration camps.</p>
<p>Margaret Wild and Julie Vivas, Let the Celebrations begin, Norwood: Omnibus Books, 1991</p>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 30 Jun 2008 00:48:56 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>A Year on Our Farm is a straightforward recount of the cycle of farm life, told through the eyes of one of the children. It is a simple text, told with both knowledge and understanding of the good things and the bad. The illustrations have attempted to portray the reality of life on the land, with a softly sentimental hue. There is a ring of accuracy in the old house behind the main homestead, where a generation has traded up from the original cottage, the sheep newly crutched with their bare bottoms, and the poddy lamb who will not accept she’s a sheep. The text has a decidedly didactic element to it, which will see it used in countless teaching units about rural life.

Penny Matthews and Andrew McLean, A Year on Our Farm, Norwood: Omnibus Books, 2002</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>A Year on Our Farm is a straightforward recount of the cycle of farm life, told through the eyes of one of the children. It is a simple text, told with both knowledge and understanding of the good things and the bad. The illustrations have attempted to portray the reality of life on the land, with a softly sentimental hue. There is a ring of accuracy in the old house behind the main homestead, where a generation has traded up from the original cottage, the sheep newly crutched with their bare bottoms, and the poddy lamb who will not accept she’s a sheep. The text has a decidedly didactic element to it, which will see it used in countless teaching units about rural life.</p>
<p>Penny Matthews and Andrew McLean, A Year on Our Farm, Norwood: Omnibus Books, 2002</p>
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		<title>Comment on Storylines and things! by jacquei</title>
		<link>http://jacquei.wordpress.com/2008/02/05/hello-world/#comment-22</link>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 30 Jun 2008 00:47:31 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Here&#039;s a comment to start things off: 

Shaun Tan&#039;s The Red Tree is one of those visually sumptuous texts which renews the debate about what constitutes a picture book and for whom is it intended. The rich and varied illustrations balance a problematic text dealing with what for many is depressing reality, where the final message could be construed as a message of hope. Tan’s visual competency provides an increasingly bleak parallel to the textual exploration of what constitutes a really bad day. The protagonist travels through an alienating and threatening world. The images become increasingly menacing as the protagonist becomes more dislocated from her everyday world. She is reflected as increasingly dominated and disenfranchised by the illustrations, and even the moment of empowerment leaves the reader feeling that tomorrow may not get much better.</description>
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<p>Shaun Tan&#8217;s The Red Tree is one of those visually sumptuous texts which renews the debate about what constitutes a picture book and for whom is it intended. The rich and varied illustrations balance a problematic text dealing with what for many is depressing reality, where the final message could be construed as a message of hope. Tan’s visual competency provides an increasingly bleak parallel to the textual exploration of what constitutes a really bad day. The protagonist travels through an alienating and threatening world. The images become increasingly menacing as the protagonist becomes more dislocated from her everyday world. She is reflected as increasingly dominated and disenfranchised by the illustrations, and even the moment of empowerment leaves the reader feeling that tomorrow may not get much better.</p>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 30 Jun 2008 00:40:47 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&#039;The Story of Frog Belly Rat Bone&#039;, for all its rollicking movement and scare-crow motif, rich colouring and games with the lettering, is a simple, didactic, moral tale. Along the way, it has a dig at the sterility and decay of our modern constructions of cities, teaches robbers not to steal and hands out a lesson about patience and nature’s bounty. Its theme works from the cover onwards, textured, rough, and created to look like it too has been made from scavengings from the dump, building through the visual binaries of the bleak grey “Cementland” and the riotous colour of the revealed treasure. The text reinforces the dank decay of the dump and the endless bounty of the treasure, with characters known for their scavenging habits to reinforce the message.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>&#8216;The Story of Frog Belly Rat Bone&#8217;, for all its rollicking movement and scare-crow motif, rich colouring and games with the lettering, is a simple, didactic, moral tale. Along the way, it has a dig at the sterility and decay of our modern constructions of cities, teaches robbers not to steal and hands out a lesson about patience and nature’s bounty. Its theme works from the cover onwards, textured, rough, and created to look like it too has been made from scavengings from the dump, building through the visual binaries of the bleak grey “Cementland” and the riotous colour of the revealed treasure. The text reinforces the dank decay of the dump and the endless bounty of the treasure, with characters known for their scavenging habits to reinforce the message.</p>
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